I really enjoy drawing the people at North Market because I feel that the individuality of the person shines through more in my drawings. It was beautiful weather too so I decided to draw some tennis players at Goodale park.
Colleen, These poses have good moments but I would like you to try to avoid filling up pages with smaller drawings. A figure with their surroundings requires space, and while having a counter in front of a subject is okay, some of these seem cropped or truncated. Also, be more conscious of how you are developing these drawings and where you are putting the darker lines. Hands and faces are easy to work up and get dark quickly... be more accurate when developing drawings where subjects are manipulating tools or products.
Colleen,
ReplyDeleteThese poses have good moments but I would like you to try to avoid filling up pages with smaller drawings. A figure with their surroundings requires space, and while having a counter in front of a subject is okay, some of these seem cropped or truncated. Also, be more conscious of how you are developing these drawings and where you are putting the darker lines. Hands and faces are easy to work up and get dark quickly... be more accurate when developing drawings where subjects are manipulating tools or products.